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Short Story
A HOUSE FOR THE SUMMER
by
Jim Bennett
The house they had come to see was in a cul-de-sac
backed by a blank factory wall as high as the houses. It was at
the end of a row of six two-up/two-down terraced houses facing the
gasworks wall. Along the street there was a smell like rotten
eggs.
“You’ll get used to the smell,” David said, “and the
house will be just for the summer, a place of our own away from
your Ma, 'til the ships start taking on.” He read the advert
again. “Two bedrooms and space for a bath. Can you imagine it,
Lou? A bath with running water?”
For the hundredth time she
wanted to remind him that there was no bath, no pipes, no taps, no
boiler, but she didn’t. She couldn’t stay with her mother any
longer and there was no prospect of a home with his mother until
they could get married, so this was it. It was cheap and with the
bit of money her mother had promised to help them out, it was a
rent they could afford, even if it did smell.
“Look Lou,
there she is now.” David pointed to a woman emerging from the
furthest house and quickly made his way toward her. Lou tried to
place her feet carefully to avoid the puddles and mud along the
road as she followed David who splashed on eagerly.
The
woman, in tight black trousers and a low-cut white blouse, had hair
rollers dangling from under the edges of a headscarf. She introduced
herself as Mrs.Davis and nodded towards the house. “This is the
one, my mother’s, before... God rest her.”
“God rest her,”
Lou and David mumbled in unison. Mrs. Davis led the way towards
the door.
It opened into a small dark front room. As her
eyes adjusted to the gloom, Lou could see a few pieces of
furniture that qualified the house to be described as furnished.
David walked straight in and sat on the one substantial thing in
the room, a misshapen sofa. It creaked and groaned as he moved
around trying to find a place where a spring was not stabbing
him.
“That’s it, make yourself at home,” Mrs. Davis said.
“It’s a good house. Room for a young couple to make improvements.”
She chattered on without pause. “Through there is the kitchen, and
upstairs the master bedroom and the second room which would
convert to a lovely bathroom, if you’ve a mind.” She looked at
David, “You look handy enough, could do a spot of decorating.”
“We’re just looking for a six month rental,” he
replied.
“Oh I see,” Mrs. Davis said. “I thought perhaps
longer, as your wife is...” She stopped, looked at Lou who shook
her head slightly. “I mean if you had a mind you could
decorate.”
Lou moved around the room, looked at the few
pieces of furniture. She tried to open a drawer in a small dresser
but had to pull so hard she was afraid a handle would come
off.
“Everything you see is included,” Mrs. Davis said, as
she steered Lou away from the drawer and towards the kitchen. Lou
nodded, though she knew she could find better in a charity shop.
The kitchen and upstairs were clean enough, even David’s mother
would agree. Idly she picked up a picture that had been turned
face down on a small table, a photo of a couple: one face
obviously Mrs. Davies with her head nestled against a smiling young man.
“If we
put a bathroom in, how does that effect the rent?” Lou
asked.
“Oh, no difference. I wouldn’t put up the rent. No
toilet, mind, unhealthy--those indoor ones. No, but a bath, well,
that’s different. Cleanliness is next to godliness, my mum always
says.” Then as an afterthought she added “God rest ...” but her
voice dropped away and Lou was not sure if she finished it or not.
“God rest her,” David repeated.
Lou looked at her
prospective landlady. Under a layer of thick makeup she could see
that Mrs. Davis was probably not much older than herself, maybe
twenty-six. Her gaze dropped and she noticed Mrs. Davis’s rounded
stomach.
Mrs. Davis fidgeted as she saw Lou
looking.
“Where are you living now?” Lou asked quietly.
There was a pause while Mrs. Davis searched for an answer.
“With my mum.” Mrs. Davis eventually replied. Lou
nodded.
David looked puzzled, “But I thought...” Lou cut
him off with a glance.
“No Mr.Davis then?”
“No, he
went off when...well, you know.”
Lou nodded and looked at
David, after a moment she said “We’ll take the house.”
“We
will?” David asked, then added, “Oh sure, that’s right, we’ll take
it.”
Mrs. Davis nodded, “I’ll sort out the rent book. What
name is it in? 'Mr and Mrs?'”
“Kearey,” Lou replied.
“Right. Mr. and Mrs. Kearey it is then.” Mrs. Davis said,
smiling broadly. “I promised to pop in and see Mrs. Hamilton, who
lives two houses down. I’ll be telling her you’ll be moving in
then. Mr. and Mrs. Kearey.” She repeated it as if to fix it in her
mind.
“Very friendly the neighbours are, very friendly.
Always popping in, give you the last spoon of sugar in the house.
They mean well, you know...”
“Yes,” said Lou. “I know the
sort of neighbours you mean, it’s been like that at my mother's.”
Mrs. Davis nodded, then looking around, she added, “I
always wanted a bathroom.”
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Jim Bennett is a poet from Liverpool in the UK. He regularly tours performing his poetry and songs in the UK and the USA He has written and had published
over forty books of all sorts from technical journals to children's stories.
He is a visiting Associate Professor of English, and works at the University
of Liverpool and Edge Hill University College. He has won a number of
awards for his poetry including, Poetry Superhighway Poet of the Year 2000,
Sefton Literary Prize (twice) and he is widely published.
Jim's songs have been sung by many other performers. "Victims" a song
responding to 9/11, performed by KMO, has been No. #1 in an alternative Folk
chart for 9 weeks and looks set to be No. #1 for Christmas 2001.
Jim has a CD single Victims coming out soon,
with Jim's song, together with KMO's hit version and Jim's
Trying to Connect You, Dockland and Charlene. You
can order it and reach Jim at: jimbennett11@btinternet.com
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